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May 27, 2014 11 years ago
FyreNWater
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You notice a Azathoth Spiny Gauntlets on the ground, but right when you bend down to pick it up, lizard minions come out of nowhere and scurry off with it!</p>
<p>As the lizards attempt to escape, your trap fires, but instead of catpturing the lizard minions, it hits them on the head... poor lizard minions! How could you! Shame on you. You shrug, and attempt to retrieve Azathoth Spiny Gauntlets But the comatose lizard minion refuses to let go, you decide to stuff both into your pocket. You are so mean.

There's a typo with "catpturing"/"capturing" as well as a capitalization after the second instance of the random item's name, in "[...] But the comatose [...]"

I don't think there's a way to deal with the a/an grammar problem when it comes to items that start with a vowel.

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May 27, 2014 11 years ago
Deadeye
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Brainfreeze

Could put "a(n)" to fix the "a/an" problem. Not a great solution, but it works.


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May 27, 2014 11 years ago
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Dexter

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